Very short Poem........?

Question

For school i have to write a poem about how the aboriginies reacted when they saw the europeans settelers for the first time.. and also what the europeans did to them. etc.. Is this all correct information so far?

They arrived on boats, entered the land,

In front of us in clothes, people stand,

They must be ghosts, with skin so pale,

Some without beards, are they female?

Soon trees were being cleared,

These creatures are to be feared,

Speaking a language that is unknown,

Wanting us to speak their own.

Thankyou in advance.

Answer 1

nice

I would change line 4.  Female seems like you could not find another rhyming word and used female because you did not want to think anymore to find something better.

Answer 2

i love it, i might leave out the beards part though

Answer 3

I like the poem sorry that's all the info I can give to you.Blessings Yahoo

Answer 4

Yes, that looks really good so far. I'd love to read the rest when it's done.

Answer 5

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