Waiting for the storm...........a poem, care to comment?

Question

The Island (waiting for the Storm)

by Jellz Fisher 2006

Silence envelopes the scene.

A stillness descends.

Eyes see what the heart knows.

Nature revealing the beauty of

its everchanging history.

Answer 1

I like, although I question "ever changing history."  Since it is the past either it should be set up to insinuate the past or changed to indicate the event coming, in my opinion.  Of course, my opinion is like the wind, changing and in the annals of history, a pittance of a footnote!

Answer 2

I like this!

I interpret 'history' to mean that what the storm becomes will become a part of history.

Answer 3

goood poem! :):):)

Answer 4

Good one! Keep it up!

Answer 5

Reminds me of seeing a mockingbird shell crack and life being born; If I had not been watching while cutting down a bush I might not have seen the nest and ended up killing the bird. I'm thankful that I can see and my heart appreciates it.

... that was really deep, wasn't it? (smile)

Answer 6

Ancient wonders.

Answer 7

Can I really do it?

I allow the peacefulness to wash over me

I revel in for a moment, inhaling deeply,

Enjoying the salty sea breeze,

The feel of the sand under my feet.

It's now or never........

Answer 8

that was wonderfully real

Answer 9

I love this poem and the scene it paints in my mind! I love how the ocean looks right before a storm, nature at it's best!

Answer 10

It's a short poem but packed with many expressions and feelings, I like it.... :)

Answer 11

Interesting and deep. It makes you think.

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Answer 12

Right on point!  Lovely Jellz!