Wanna read a poem i wrote without paper!?

Question

heal the dead nurse doctor!

this place is filled

with her voice

her own distinctively useless voice

bouncing rubber-like

from wall to wall

(from white to blankness)

past the cracked window

making the door creak

(at 12 am)

i hear again

heal the dead nurse doctor!

gripping the stethoscope

till the rain is washed

clean off the ground

to his sleeve

his forehead crinkling

like soaked dead leaves

this place is filled

with her heart

her own tattered bruised heart

echoing its beat

across the narrow halls

stretching long enough

for a new nurse to walk

bearing the cross

she chooses to bear

on her head

on her sleeves

wherever it will fit

on her unstained uniform.

Answer 1

another stark view of emotions so superbly given.. that I am left in awe... staring blank at this page

you

are very awesome

at drawing out the pictures

at holding the emotions

showing reader how to feel again

thank you

much luck

good night

your gift

talent - curse

thanks for sharing

this

Answer 2

You should try to get it published in a book ,  There is several places where they will publish poems like this.

Very Good Poem.