Was it worth it? Please rate, comment, etc.?

Question

Was it worth it baby,

to choose money over love?

Was his love divine?

Did it come from above?

I bet the things he bought you don't even fit

I bet that house is real cold

Is your love still worth a lot?

No, I bet it was fool's gold

What, you want me back?

Girl, it's too late for that.

How are you going to fix your love?

Pull a rabbit out of your hat?

Magic won't help you now

Magic won't help you later

And magic can't take away

The fact that you're a traitor

The fact that you broke my heart

The fact that it cured itself from pain

You wanted to keep me prisoner

I broke out from your chains

I'm free, free to fly

Free to live free to die

Free to live my life

Free to laugh free to cry

Your house will get foreclosed

You're mortality will get old

You just can't fix this with glue

God put me right in front of you

Who are you to leave behind

Better than you could ever find

Why'd you lose my trust

And crush our love into dust

Answer 1

Someone made the wrong choice

she chose money over your love

It is like that song money can't buy love

The choice she made was wrong

and all the begging and pleading will not

give you back

I like the line that says magic won't work

and the magic hat.

She will have to earn your trust and love

over again and its doubtful she will get either one.

The damage is permanent and nothing will fix it

not even glue.

Answer 2

This would make a really good rap song. You should check into it. Well worded.

Hope my opinion means something to you, because as a published poet I know how it can be.

I do like this. If I had any real connections I'd hook you up. You should contact Shady Productions.

Answer 3

this poem is like a picture without the actual painting. i believe this would make a great book and u could win best author of the year. whoever you wrote this about is very sorry and regretful. you are very talented ,you have a very informed spirit like a toddler that's been striped away from his parents. keep up the good work and continue to write i would love to read more

Answer 4

thats pretty good!

Answer 5

Hey, I like this . . . Will I hear the lyrics in a song ? ?

Keep flying free . . .

the right one will come along.