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Was this a bad poem/way to tell my boyfriend what happened?!?

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i mad a big mistake!...and i didn't kno how to tell my boyfriend, so i wrote a poem!!

[do u think this was a bad way to tell him?!]

[what do you think about the poem!?!?]

Kiss

Now baby my love for you is so strong

And your trust for me is to,

And you would never think I’ll do nothing wrong;

Nothing wrong to hurt you

But I proved your trust for me wrong

But I didn’t mean to do this

I blamed it on temptation,

The craving I felt for a kiss

It was something bout; touching his lips with mine that made me so curious

Our relationship; I take very serious

I’m not even sure on how it happened,

don’t know how I approached; if I approached

I blanked out…it’s mysterious

I wasn’t sure on how to tell you this

I didn’t wanna seem cheap

I love you to much to break up,

But me and you both would never expect that I’d cheat

That’s why I wrote it down on this paper as a poem,

And I know you’ll feel with rage as you read

And I apologize deeply

I still want us to be

There’s no excuses on why I did this

I never wanted to hurt you;

Now what I gotta do to prove this?

I’m new to this, I usually never have to say sorry to you,

So don’t fault me if I’m clueless

But now my relationships is no longer sitting on clouds,

It fell down to the bricks

And I blame it on temptation;

That craving I felt for a kiss

I really can’t afford for us to end

Not after I done let you so far in…

You’re my man, my best friend, but you probably could never trust me again

But you could trust me again

I promise this would never happen again

I never promised you before that I would never cheat with a kiss;

We just both made the assumption that it would never happen

That’s why I want to forget that it happened;

Lets move on,

Or start over; lets pretend it ain’t happen

You keep handing me a empty relationship,

What I’m suppose to do with this?

I told you before I’m new to this;

Now your faulting me cause I’m clueless

I just want you to help me, help us through this

I apologize deeply for this;

Bay I swear I do, and I swear I didn’t mean to do it,

I didn’t want to do this to you

I don’t wan’t us to end like this

And I don’t have any excuses;

Cause I blame it on temptation;

And the craving that I felt for that kiss!

By: Mz. Minny

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  1. Yes.


  2. I find that writing to my boyfriend when we have problems is one of the best ways to feel like he is listening to you. The poem was your opportunity to diffuse the situation and not have it blow up out of proportion. However your boyfriend feels about the cheating - at least you had the opportunity to say your piece in a calm manner - and he understands your regret very clearly. Good luck.

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