Was this too simple for Yahoo to comprehend?

Question

This is my second try...

NOBODY

Nobody to kiss good night,

Nobody to hold me tight.

Nobody to share my pain,

Nobody to stop the rain.

Nobody to stop my tears,

Nobody to ease my fears.

Nobody to hold my hand,

Nobody to understand.

Nobody to see me smile,

Nobody to stay awhile.

Nobody to say it's okay,

Nobody to hold this day.

Answer 1

Wow, how sad. I sure hope you don't feel like that poem, but it was very nicely written. I think a lot of us feel like that sometimes, but if you do, put your smile on, be thankful for what you have, and I hope you have a great day.

Answer 2

It seems you need a lover and a friend and an overseer.

Answer 3

i realy like it. its simple but brilliant. this is how i feel now. your a great writer you wrote somthing simple that touches the hearts of the readers =) keep writing!

Answer 4

Its a nice thought provoking poem about loneliness I think.

Answer 5

Yup. Very simple and nice. Yahoo maybe ban you. haha

Answer 6

Ignore Yahoo. Your poetry is beautiful and I live alone and it seems like you may have even written it to me. It covers my life so well. Thank you for your gift. ♥

Answer 7

Nobody can take your right away

To have a beautiful and lovely day!

Answer 8

You sound down this morning...don't let Yahoo do that...And yes, some things are just simple and easy...some would say, "merely for fun!"...Yahoo has no sense of easy, fun, or humor.

I blew bubbles out of my attic window last night, when some kids were walking down the street.  It was cute...they didn't know where they were coming from.  

Answer 9

Aww Sweetie.  We all feel this way sometimes - things always get better.  Ã¢Â˜Â¼