Wat do you think?

Question

He is the darkness, a cold sloitary figure cloaked in shadows and mystery.

She is the sunlight, his reason to live and his willing slave.

Apart they are powerless, but together they posess a feirce, unforgivable power so strong others can only imagine - or die witnessing...

i wrote this at random at about 1.15 this morning... what do you think?

Answer 1

beautiful.It demonstrates both happyness and misery ...I don't know how to describe it, it has a very likeable quality.

Answer 2

That is great ! seriously ... ^_^

Answer 3

I feel the emotion that you were attempting to describe.

That bond that you feel does seem to be unbreakable...for now.