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Weekly haiku fix from myles anyone?

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He writes of her now-

the sound of one hand typing-

and bangs the keys hard

(the loneliness of the long-distance typist)

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“You took my cherry!”

the little girl wailed at lunch-

but she will steal his...

(Ah, so, grasshopper! Good haiku has reference to season, which here is indicated by the cherry. As for the later season when cherries will again be stolen, you see, it may take some years but the great circles of life will close upon each other, and karmic justice will be done, won’t it, d**k?)

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I am an Aussie

and I love this sunburnt country-

but think of Brazil.

(Think nudist colony)

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  1. Irresistibly?

    Boy, do you have a long row

    to hoe in hot sun!

    Nudist Colony?

    In Brazil they wear blue jeans

    Like Australia.

    If you pick a lock

    You don't need keys.  But what fun

    you have when things click.


  2. Sure ill take a Myles on the rocks....please

    I see the sea

    the waves knock

    as Myles rocks

    as he types

    mmmh ....i suck but oh well at least i try... and yes I have a sensitive heart for real pain .... i sense fake pain miles away..

  3. Keyboard skills are just

    Digital Technology

    Manually applied

    We could all see you

    Coming for miles, so we have

    To hand it to you

    Fetish for Brazil?

    The girls waxing lyrical

    Life's a beach they say

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