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Question

Every step I made

seemed to talk,

liked crushed dead leaves

beneath my feet.

Howling trees

that waved,

wanting my footprints

to be swayed.

But I'm walking

I will walk still,

through your twisted path

and bitter pill.

Answer 1

it was ok until i got to the last line. how can you walk through a bitter pill? it doesn't make sense.

Answer 2

like it. very deep emotion.

Answer 3

That poem is good, it seems to me that you are trying to describe a hard journey that you had to take, you didn't want to do anything wrong so you trod lightly, but in the end though you found it difficult, you made it through. I may be wrong but that was my interpretation, everyones will be different. Please tell me what you intended it to mean! Thanks, :)

Answer 4

It's very good, but it's so deep yet so simple. iF YOU WANT IT TO BE A DEEP,EMOTIONAL POEM THEN MAKE IT A LITTLE MORE WORDY, BUT i LIKE IT.

oops sorry about the caps locks!

Answer 5

REALLY GOOD

but please tell in what sense are you using word bitter pill.

THANKYOU

Answer 6

i like it