Well i need a good topic for a creative writing story with light and shade. any ideas?

Question

well i did one story and when i got it back i wasn't happy with the mark and i asked my teacher why i gat such a bad grade wheni had been doing so well and he said it was to predictible and there was no depth help would be great!!!

Answer 1

Yes.

One day i bought a shade and the next day i relaized the lgiht came thourgh,

Theeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Ennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...

Answer 2

If I understand what you are asking.........Light  and shade with make up......You use light reflecting makeup to make something appear more larger...for instance a tiny nose, skinny lips.....and use shade (darker color) to make things seem smaller..Double chin, large nose.... I guess that's what you maybe asking?????

Answer 3

Go to extremes...try to push your charecters to the limit and think of the craziest thing that could happen...

Example:

The world is coming to an end in three day...sounds crazy right? But what if a war broke out? What if there was a drought on top of that? This may be an exaggeration but you should try to get your mind thinking that way.