What's Your Opinion On This Plot Line?

Question

I'm writing a story, and I was wondering if you thought the plot was any good.

"There is an enormous amount of people claim to have been abducted by aliens, and it turns out the reason aliens have been abducting more people is because they're pissed off at mankind for lying to them about the Roswell, New Mexico incident, in 1947, and well the aliens only just found out we were lying and they're coming to kill all humans, but humans aren't the aliens mane priority right now, they're already at war with loads of other planets, so Earth is stuck in the middle of a Galactic war, and there's an aliens race out to destroy Earth, and all of Earths people have to work together, to save the human race."

So what do you think?

Answer 1

well it sounds interesting but you might not want to post more ideas you have, cuz someone might steal them

Answer 2

Hmm..I'm not much into sci-fi.   But i'm confused....the aliens want to kill  all humans because...we covered it up?  Why would they care? What does Earth have to do with their "galactic war"?  Maybe have a little more development as to why they crashed, why we covered it up, and why that offended them.

Answer 3

It reminds me of the movie Weekend at Bernies. No, jusy kidding...I'd read it but I'd much rather watch the movie esp if it stars Danny Devito as the alien leader

Answer 4

Yes. I like it! I love stories about aliens and this seems like it could turn into an awesome book! Also kudos on it being kinda "out there" It makes for something NEW! and I could really use a book thats doesn't totally fit into one category*

Go with it...and Good Luck

Answer 5

Let's see, they are bothering to abduct more humans over fake New Mexico stories? Doesn't make much sense, need to tweak that part, but the rest of the story is superb, maybe a sarcastic: "Who cares about the lowly humans" kind of thing would be very cool, sort of awe are reading too much into everything kind of deal , maybe a story that reflects the everyday stories of  Smarter than us beings who are sick and tired of our conceited belief that they want to study us and are focused on US, when all we are is a pitstop in the glory of the outher solar system! As if an alien disposes of his chewing gum and it lands on a farmer in Utah who appears in every newspaper the next day explaining how he was gifted with a device that can change the weather..or something like that...hum...me likes! Write it and send me a copy.

Answer 6

It's alright, but I probably wouldn't want to read it.

Btw, that's a huge run on sentence.  

Answer 7

I don't mean to be harsh, but it is WAY OUT THERE. I mean conspiracy theories bad.

A bit cliche also...