What's a good title of this poem?

Question

Hmm.. I never titled my poems whatsoever. Just named them like Secret #1 or Sorrow#8. Well, stuff like that. Can you suggest a fitting title for my poem. I know I'm not a good poet or something. You can see that, anyway. So please don't criticize harshly. It would be great if you can give a title to my siple poem ;)

Love is blind, they say

But love also makes you blind

Strangling the innocent mind

Illusions are what the eyes will see

Losing grip of yourself and reality

A slave to what the heart dictates

Never thinking of what awaits

Doing anything

Doing everything

To make it last forever

In a fairytale world that ends

Happily every after

And never looking back to remember

How many have you killed

How many have you fooled

The precious opportunities wasted

The promises you stated

Forgetting everything else

Even to think of your poor self

All for her.

Answer 1

All For Her.

Answer 2

I like this poem. It is dark though, but U have what it takes to be a poet. Just keep on writing and reading.Post more of Ur poems.

For a title, THE DARK SIDE OF LOVE  or LOVE ILLUSION.

Answer 3

I would give the title 'Witchcraft' to this poem.

I specifically liked this part

"To make it last forever

In a fairytale world that ends

Happily every after"

Good poem though, you can see you've been madly in love but also you're still quite young. Keep up the good work.

Answer 4

For Love

Listen to my poem, and

comment.  Thank you.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dhL6PcxeJ...

Answer 5

heres some names:

the blindness of love, ode to love, you have my heart, all for her, etc. and thats not true. thats a great poem and youre a great poet!!! :)

Answer 6

in limbo man walking .......instead of dead man walking

Answer 7

Not Always Happily Ever After

Great poem by the way!

Answer 8

um.. probs something like "The Truth of Love" or "The Unspoken Consequences of Love"

but i really like the title "Witchcraft" by the other guy/girl just you might have to change the poem to fit the title just a little bit ...

anyway goodluck!!

Answer 9

Blind Strangle

Answer 10

Blind Love ~

Answer 11

The Road to Love... Driven by Insanitiy

Answer 12

Blind Truth.

I like how you've formerly named your other poems as well.

Take care.

Answer 13

you could have named this "John's Poem" for your words were what i couldnt write. Whoever she is, she must be an amazing woman.  maybe the name should just be...all for love

Answer 14

Another side of love?

It seems like you're telling about how most people only see the cute and perfect qualities of love, but really there are people you hurt, and dishonesty...those kinds of things too.

I think either,"Another Side of Love" or "Understanding Love"...possibly,"What is Love?"

Those are good.

And you are a good poet :) Not everybody can do that...

But one thing... when you said," In a fairytale world that ends, Happily every after" Was that a typo? Ever*?

That sounds better lol...

Good poem!

Answer 15

love is valuable

Answer 16

for love or for her

MAN THIS POEM IS AWSOME REALY

Answer 17

"Charmed" "Fallen" "Stricken"

"Queen Takes Pawn"

"Love Drunk"

Answer 18

The strangling of Innocence.

Lack of reality.

Fantasy Love.

I like you poetry, keep writing it or it would be " precious opportunities wasted " !

Good Luck hunni. X :-)