What's the elements to a great love story?

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Hi, I’m I the process of writing a romance novel that takes place in the great depression. I’ve posted 7 chapters on line. Can somebody read them and let me know what they think?

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Answer 1

only element of a love story that is good is the true love that you would die for the other person, show that in your books and hold out on putting them together cause the build up is what people want