What's your take on it?

Question

i wrote this a while back and would like to know how other people interpret it. what is it about? what does it mean to you? and what emotion does it bring you(if any)?...thnx

Within Ungaurded

fresh faced girl blissful to the eye

unknowingly a prey for sinful indulgence.

her betrayal flows through trusted hands

now, internally shamed and hollowed.

fresh no longer was she,

but one distorted by an unspoken truth,

where tainted innocence lay

and pure body

forever lost.

Answer 1

It's a regretful expression of a loss of innocence.  

It reminds me of highschool.

I only wish I could console her; show her that her purity is not lost,  and that that thinking is just society pushing guilt onto an experimental youth. >:D< . Just remember,

"The world you desired can be won, it exists, it is real, it is possible, it's yours. " A R

Answer 2

agreed but also your a very bad writer in my opinion.

Answer 3

A naive girl who was trick in to losing her virginity and was regretful about it.

Answer 4

It is incredibly and descriptively written.  And can be applied in essence to any situation where innocence can be changed to sad but wiser knowledge.  

The unguarded moment of such a violation of passage is the telling and regretted source of the whole pain in the poem.  Like Adam and Eve disobeying God first in their mind with the act to follow.  They both trusted the snake who twisted God's words not as a law, but as a law that should be broken to attain the wisdom that God wanted only for himself.  This was of course a lie.  God wanted to share his wisdom with his obedient children that he loved.  And not to children who were slaves to the devil or to their own weaknesses.  Such a dividing moment between God and man and yet both seemed so innocent of that passage.  Only the consequences that emerged revealed the full rebellious nature of the act.

Later.

Answer 5

I hate these poems because they give me a bitter/sweet emotion, which I never could grasp.

As for the poem goes, you write beautifully!

Answer 6

What about someone who feels guilty for cheating and lying

Or maybe an alcoholic looking back on her life and regretting their drinking