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What Do You Think About My Poem????????

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As I gazed at the sky where the

heaven stands still above us and

beyond this world, Humans may

wonder whether it's real or not, but

I'm here to say it is real as I gazed

briskly into the sky there I saw

heaven now when I gaze at the sky

I feel a connection it is filled with

happiness and joy. You may not

believe this but you will once you

will see what I have seen the smile

that fills your heart the happiness in

their voice and the greatful, kindness and

loving lord who has made this

heaven, the one who created the

smiles, laughs and the people in

the world. When going to heaven

it's like a new world has come your

dreams come true no worries nor

frightning it has all gone away just be

patient and wait for your time you will

see the place that was in your dreams

and now it has come true - Amen <3

and this one

As I examine the sky I find myself

lost in the sunset fluffy soft clouds that

surround me and the colors of the sunset

float by my side, it feels when I look

out my window when the sunset

seems to have touch my face that

I have been flying around with the

wind dancing in my face and the

colors changing time after time it's

a wonderful experience it feels as if it

all seemed to happen. When finding

yourself lost in the sunset's core the

locked side of you is freed you can

fly, laugh, smile and imagine, When

thinking about it that is the best part

or being in a sunset just feeling the

clouds being able to have the wind

dance around you is the sunsets

true colors - Allyson Nguyen <3

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  1. I loved your poem your poem made me pictures all of it in my mind and i can say that poem was really great! Good job!

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