What Do You Think Of My Male Character so Far? I want Your Opinions!?

Question

He doesnt have a name yet,

He is mannish, muscle built, he has shiny brown messy hair, His skin is a glowing tan, his big black eyes shine bright, cute shy smile, with an angel sculpted face, and casual style.

But he has his flaws- He can be Clingy, Stubborn, Manipulative, Posessive.

So What Do You Think So Far? I'm Not Finished with him Yet.

Answer 1

sounds good ^_~ the rest of him should sound great =]

Answer 2

Angels don't really have scultptured faces in the way I think you mean it (like a statue, right?). He sounds okay- what's the good points of his personality?

Answer 3

He reminds me a little bit of Armand from The Vampire Chronicles.

Answer 4

How old is he supposed to be??

Can his name be Leo?

Answer 5

Please, spare us from a poorly-masked Edward fanfiction. You are obviously into it since your name is Alice Bella C. (Cullen!)

LuthienT

Answer 6

Sounds cute, loveable. Great aspects!!!

Is this for your story you are writing? The question you asked a moment ago? Coz I love a romance....as I said.  

Answer 7

Armand from the vampire chronicles? That book was SO oddly sexual. Your character kind of pisses me off by the way.

Answer 8

Sorry but you have described a cross between Edward and Jacob.