What Do You think of my poem? Any ideas for names?

Question

Children of the rainbow

Praying to the skies

Washing in the morning dew

The sunshine in their eyes

Free and free to love, to learn

To dance and sing and shout

Opposing only cruelty

They hardly hang about

The cancer now is spreading

It's spreading to the streets

Warn the children not to trust

Anyone they meet

Now the dance is slowing down

The cold is setting in

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In the discount bin

Answer 1

Social Waste

but really, at least try improving the rhythm .

Answer 2

you can call it 'S****y *** poem' or **** for short.

Answer 3

I liked your first three stanzas.  The fourth seems incomplete or I am not getting the idea.  I took the liberty of providing some edit ideas for you to consider.  Overall, very nice.  Keep at it.

Children of the rainbow

Praying to the skies

Washing in morning dew

sunshine in their eyes

Free and free to love, to learn

To dance and sing and shout

Opposing only cruelty

They hardly hang about

cancer now is spreading

spreading to the streets

Warn the children not to trust

Anyone they may meet

Now the dance is slowing down,

the cold, setting in

You can search for what you need

In the discount bin

Answer 4

I have nothing to say ..

Answer 5

omg thats cool and for the title life is just a burn or fast to slow, slowing down, geting darker geting lighter

stuff like that but yes your poem is great and could you please awnser mine i would be very greatful http://nz.answers.yahoo.com/question/ind...

oh and don't lisen to those people your poem is great and if you like sometime i could show you some of mine but there not that good i just wrote them when i was board but yours is great and a marvous poem :)