What Do YouThink of This Poem? Points This Way!!!!!!!!!!?

Question

My friend is a really nice person but a lot of people don't see her that way....she wrote this and I was wondering what you might think. Its called Love Bein' Me:

I wake up in the mornin'

look in the mirror n' I see

what every single person

said I never be.

Every single day,

I went through all that pain,

never even sure,

I'd live another day.

I wish I had anohter chance,

to only take a glance,

to look at me and see,

What I could really be.

When I really knew,

what I could really do,

I knew it was my destiny,

to love bein' me.

Answer 1

That's a beautiful poem. I am greatly encouraging you to continue writing so wonderful texts, you've got great inspiration.

Answer 2

great!!!

Write more.  Get it published

book "The Poets Market"  updated each year, probably on Amazon.com

sinc,

Pub. Poet

Answer 3

well written. i like it.

Answer 4

I really liked it!!

It appears that your freind, despite the pain she went through, is happy to be who she is - which is what we all should be striving for. Your freind sounds confident - yet not cocky!!

Answer 5

i love it and i now how it feels!!!!!!!!!!

please tell her to keep it up!

Answer 6

its amazing great job