What Do you Think Of This Female Character Of Mine?

Question

She does not have a name yet because I am still working on her.

She is very enchanting, she has long thick red hair, her skin is snow pale, she is average height, her brown almond shaped eyes are deep, she has a cute button nose, her alluring smile fits perfectly on her heart shaped face, and she has a very trendy style.

Her flaws- To honest, gets angry really fast, and a little overprotective of loved ones.

Answer 1

sounds a bit like me :)

Answer 2

Too much like the descriptions from Twilight. Sorry.

Answer 3

hmmm...sounds cool. I like the fact she can get angry. It is annoying when people stay extremly calm. That is boring. I think she souds great! ( perfect for that guy?)

Answer 4

Spend more time in developing what makes her enchanting than her outward appearence. Trendy is subjective to each reader and not a characteristic. The best characters are reflections of real people, not fantasy.  

Answer 5

Those dont sound like real flaws. Make her a bit less Mary-sueish kay? And the other girl was right, she sounds too much like Bella :/