What about this poem its how i feel now ?

Question

Entrapment

by Chris

Hopelessly bound

unfettered

by the chains of love's grip

- greatest gift,

fate's cruelest curse.

Wherefore do I weep

at knowing the joy,

the warmth,

at feeling the peace,

the fire.

Wherefore do I weep

unable to complete ,

to be,

unknown the kiss,

the flames.

Wherefore do I weep

at loving not living

seeing not touching

breathing not sharing

holding not loving?

All,

because I, The Fool,

am no more?

Answer 1

hey chris u again made me weep for u.....will u give me a chance to share your sadness..trust me i love u .UP SET FOR U.

Answer 2

Its nice. In my opinion your poem describes about some one who is in vain of love and affection.  

Answer 3

Mediocre.

Answer 4

very interesting...

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Answer 5

does duck need a new water friend

Answer 6

Did you write this?

It's beautiful, but sad.

I'm sorry you are so sad.

You have cheered me up so many times.

I wish I had the words to make you feel better.

Answer 7

did you write that ? wow I thought you were just about jokes-but then they do say intelligence is linked with humour. For want of a less cliched word, your poem is excellent

Answer 8

its really nice

keep up the good work and i hope u feel better :)