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What about this poem ?

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Jesus

Knocked on my door to say hi ?

On a sunny day

Flew down from a cloud

In his red Cadillac

Check his gold plated watch

Sing a song of sixpence, pocket full of pie

Forget all your troubles

Father charismas calls to see your eyes

He then touched

His Cross around his neck

Singing poetic lines in rap

Wearing his long frock gown

With a smile

Asked me if I needed sweeteners

To brighten up my day

I said yes

He took out his smile

From his wallet

& put it in my pocket

He said

This will help you later

If your in trouble

Cars been hit for a six

Belly ache

Around the rink

Broken down

By the side of the road

& you need a socket

Then he scooted

Down the road

On a skateboard

Not a moment to waste

Like a rocket

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  1. It is very wild!!


  2. uhh

  3. Life On Mars...

    This the most awe inspiring use of metaphor I've read since I've been a member last year. Some people won't understand your message. Let's see if I can grasp the meaning. People don't believe everything until they see it and if a religious icon came down from heaven to relate to you in a way that you understand, it would reaffirm your beliefs. If he came to give me a blessing of hope looking like he does it most religious documentations, I would be scared to death! Do you want me to believe in you,Lord? Then relate to me in a way that would make my comfortable. Amen... Grade  A -
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