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What are your opinions on my poem?

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Life is simple, Truth is not

This is meager.

This is weak.

This is ‘feeling’.

Forced to leak.

This is portion.

This is small.

This is man-made

Short and tall.

This is un-real.

This is fake.

This is simply

What we make.

This is human.

This is you.

This is me and

This is true.

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  1. HEY!!

    I LOVE IT !!!!! truley!! i mean u really got some tallent , never stop, and it will get better by time,

    just have a title for this poem , then its really great! keep on the good work!


  2. It needs a title, unless the first line is its title...

    A lot of repetition, fine with me, but may not be fine with others.

    So I guess this IS simple.  I like it.

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