What can i do!!!!!!?

Question

does this sound like a good about me?

Hey yall. My name is Lyndsey. I also go by Lynds. I’m 20. I've lived in enter place here, pretty much my entire life and try to make the best of it! I went to school here, where I studied Graphic Communications(class of 2007). I’m a full-time student at __ in __, I’m taking liberal arts. I'm random, a Boston Red Sox and New England Patriots fan, I also like to watch the NASCAR races as much as possible. I love all kinds of music but I do like songs with good melodies and meaningful lyrics. Friends and family are extremely important to me. I'm terrible at describing myself, but what I can tell you is that I’m shy when I first meet someone but then I’m loud and fun. You will’nt be disappointed or have a dull moment. I hate fake people! All you can do is be you since that’s all you can be! I’m looking for people who are fairly similar to me, that will accept me for who I am and will appreciate everything that I have to offer them(like wise).

also what should i do with my display name?now its Lўnds☮pettymys

pettymys means disappointment in finnish....

Answer 1

everything looks great

Answer 2

Use bigger words, & emphasize.

Don't use words like yall, it makes you sound waayyy too country &

Ignorant. That's how I do all of my About Mes (:

Answer 3

I'm going to copy and paste the parts you should keep, it'd be easier then explaining what to do.

Hey y'all. My name is Lyndsey,but I also go by Lynds.[[NEXT SENTENCE IS OPTIONAL, it's up to you.]] I went to school __ where I studied Graphic Communications(class of '07). I’m a full-time student at __ in __,and  I’m studying liberal arts.I love all kinds of music but I do like songs with good melodies and meaningful lyrics.My friends and family are extremely important to me.I’m shy when I first meet someone but then I’m loud and fun.I hate fake people! Just be yourself and we'll get along fine.Right now I’m looking for people who will accept me for who I am and what I have to offer.

as for your name, translating it to japanese or something like that could be interesting, or just a nickname you like.

Answer 4

it sounds good. as for the display name, i don't know.

Answer 5

what is it for mate ?

Answer 6

Sounds Good!

Here is a cool version to put with codes already in it. So you can just copy && paste it. Did a few tweeks here and there. Hope u ♥ it

Hey yall. <br> <b>LYNDSEY </b> is the name. <br> Prefer <i>Lynds</i> for short <br> 20 yrs young <br> Lived in <u>Enter Place</u> pretty much <i>my entire life</i> and <br> trying to make the best of it! <br> I went to school here, <br> studied <u>Graphic Communications </u> <br> <b>class of 2007.</b>  I’m a full-time student<br> at <i> __ </i> in <i>__</i>,<br> taking <u>liberal arts.</u>  A random person =]<br> Boston Red Sox and New England Patriots fan, <br> ♥ to watch the <u>NASCAR</u> races as much as possible. <br> ♥ all kinds of music <br> but I do like songs with good <i>melodies and meaningful lyrics</i> <br> <b> Friends && Family</b> are extremely <u>important</u> to me. <br> I'm terrible at describing myself, <br> but what I can tell you is that I’m shy when I first meet someone but then I’m loud and fun. <br> You won't be disappointed or have a dull moment w/me <br>  fake people = HATE <br> All you can do is be <i> yourself</i> since that’s all you can be! <br> looking for people who are fairly similar to me, <br> that will accept me for who I am and will appreciate everything that I have to offer them (like wise).

This answer deserves the 10 points!!!