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What comes to mind after reading my poem?

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It's a haiku; I call it Bed Head

Tumultuous curls

The answer to my question

Is tangled within

Do you like it?

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  1. are you a beautyful girl?


  2. "tangled within" makes me feel like praying or meditating. (which is a good thing)

  3. Surf.   No, I am sorry but I do not like it.  It is too vague.

    I see waves of water, surf.  But it could be hair, or yarn, or wheat. Just too vague.

  4. unfinished..think you could expand it alot but it's a great start, i like it

  5. its really abstract, it still kind of asking me right now, sort of philosophical metaphysical stuff, cooler than expected

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