What corrections should i make to my poem??

Question

looks so good

seems so far

how to get it

am i too late

have to get it

before its gone

seasons changing

running out of time

making my way

but dont move to fast

it could disappear

finally there

so good

but for how long

just savor it

Answer 1

sounds good just the way it is!! :)

I wouldn't change it a bit!!

Answer 2

it's really good. spellcheck on "but don't move too fast". i wouldn't change a word. i wonder what your title will be. fifteen short lines tell a tale with passion. you need to write more poetry.