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What do You Think About These Lyrics i Made?

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my girlfirend lives so far away =( and i hardley ever see her so i wrote a song to try to help me not be depressed over it =''( tell me what you think of it and please somone help me handle it i LOVE HER!!!!

We walk through the doorway

We walk through the doorway, heard you calling from the hall

To find you in the bedroom loving me even more…

I kiss your body to the cellar where we lay, the wax it melts away,

I kiss your face

Now were starting to love each other more

I painted your face all over my walls and the hallway we first met in

Now we wait, like the drug, like the change in the pain it goes on for so long

And oh, how it hurts in the worst way, now that you're gone, it's so wrong, it's so wrong

If I could take you somewhere, I'd take you to the happiest place,

Showing you all the paintings I made of you, admire all your beauty

Admire all your Beauty in different ways, your hands on my picture frames

Your eyes in the glass wear your face as my mask

Now were are starting to love each other more

A gallery of your beauty, no charge at the door

As you wait, like the drug, like the change in the pain it goes on for so long

And oh, how it hurts in the worst way, now that you're gone, it's so wrong, it's so wrong....

We lost control now our face’s are pale, your body's cold

Wait, like the drug, like the change in the pain it goes on for so long

And oh, how it hurts in the worst way, now that you're gone, it's so wrong, it's so wrong...

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  1. Wow that is pretty deep, but beautiful.

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