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Question

Sunrise to Sunset

We awake early at dawn-tired and restless we begin to yawn.

Today is a day we cannot despise-our eyes cast up towards the sunrise.

Before us the sky unveils the sun-like he’s kept it a secret and not told anyone.

But now the secret is not anymore-a fascination our eyes adore.

Hand in hand we watch the sky-saying nothing, not one little sigh.

All the stars fade away-yet the sun comes up to start his day.

Now we lie eye to eye-watching the sun journey across the sky.

The evening slips into our hands-our minds embark to different lands.

We dream of outer space far and near-and when we awake night is here

Again the sun has secretly hidden away-all we have now is the moon and stars light until day.

So the night will fall to dawn-and the cycle will continue on.

Dawn to dusk, sunrise to sunset-for this whole thing we’ll never forget.

And every time we look to the horizon above-we will always remember our endless love.

Answer 1

I really like it!

i love rhyming poems and this one is very good