What do think of my fanfiction(life with derek)? ?

Question

I have written part of my first fanfiction (4 chap.) and you don't have to read them all but what do you think of it? Please try to be nice and not too brutal. And any tips, things i can add, change, or ideas for what to do next would be great. Thanks!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4509692/1/Babies_and_dancing

Answer 1

lol..cute.