What do think of this Yu-Gi-Oh! deck?

Question

Any honest suggestion would be great! ^_^

Monsters: 22

3x Nimble Momonga

2x Spell Striker

2x Cyber Dragon

2x Jinzo

2x Caius the Shadow Monarch

1x Raiza the Storm Monarch

1x D. D. Warrior Lady

1x D. D. Assailant

1x Snipe Hunter

1x Card Trooper

1x Treeborn Frog

1x Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

1x Exiled Force

1x Marshmallon

1x Spirit Reaper

1x Sangan

Spells: 13

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Smashing Ground

1x Fissure

1x Nobleman of Crossout

1x Heavy Storm

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Monster Reborn

1x Premature Burial

1x Brain Control

1x Enemy Controller

1x Shrink

1x Pot of Avarice

1x Swords of Revealing Light

Traps: 5

1x Mirror Force

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Widespread Ruin

1x Magic Cylinder

1x The Transmigration Prophecy

Total: 40

I'm thinking about another Enemy Controller or maybe even Shrink... Any Suggestions?

Answer 1

I like the deck, but this is a Monarch deck.  You need more then 3 Monarchs to make this an effective deck.  Add 1 Caius, and 2 or 3 Monarchs of your choice (either Mobius for S/T destruction, Zaborg for monster destruction, or Thestalos for hand destruction) and take out Snipe Hunter, Card Trooper, and one of your DD monsters or 1 of your Jinzo or both if you decide to add 4 Monarchs.  With the amount of special summons you have, it won't be a problem getting them to the field.

As for spells, I think it's fine the way it is.  If you wanna try something different, then take out Pot and Fissure for either 2 Shrink or 1 Shrink and 1 E-Con.

Traps need to be worked on though.  Mirror and Torrential are fine.  It's the others that I'm not too sure about.  You should add maybe some Solemns and some Phoenix Wind Wing Blasts.  I usually run 2 of each.

These are all minor changes, but I think should help your deck out alot.  I hope it helps.

Answer 2

7/10

Answer 3

in this deck pot of avarice is not tha helpfull cause its not a fast deck.. fissure im with u u can always use it also shrink.. i like ur deck the thing i would change is take off 1x jinzo and put 1x caius more..  like ur deck.. 10/10

Answer 4

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Answer 5

i would take out fissure caus u got smashing ground and lightning vortex and add in either shrink or ememy controller (enemy controller preferrebly) i think that u have done a great job making that deck and it runs lots of good cards like grand mole, treeborn frog, cyber dragon and card trooper. i rate 10/10 nice job