What do thou think of my poem? is it good?

Question

You

You are the sweet scent of flowers,

The essence of the Spring

I’m a bare and withered tree,

Dreaming of the life you bring,

Whenever you look and smile at me

Under the soft vernal-rain

You water my ever-thirsty roots

And I forget all my pain

You paint my naked boughs again

Green as they should be

You bring back the chirping birds

Oh, how they sing for me!

They build their nests amid my leaves

So neatly with their beaks

And I become a joyful tree

That’s what every bird seeks!

Answer 1

I'm usually a very critical person, especially when it comes to any art form... but I really love your poem. I love your use of metaphor and you got your entire point across without drifting away from the point like a lot of poems I see on here.

Good job.

The title needs work lol.

Answer 2

I liked it! it really shows how you feel about a girl i think.

Answer 3

It's really good. Im wondering who the birds represent. The one thing that got me was 1/4s of the poem was about the birds and I have no idea who they are! So when you pick best answer could you mention who they are.

Answer 4

I love it! music came to my mind as I read and reread this.  Beautiful imagery.

Answer 5

Not bad at all.  It seems to flow well as I read.

Answer 6

The poem is very good,indeed it touches the inner heart to indicate the presence of allmighty to lookafter even a tree.