What do u think?? a poem i wrote called '' a typical love''?

Question

LOVE IS LIKE WEATHER COLD,SUNNY,BREEZY BUT RAINY IN A WAY,

THAT PERSON IS THE SUN TO BRIGHT UP YOUR DAY,

STOPS THE RAIN WHEN YOU ARE SAD,

EVEN THOUGH THEY ARE THE ONE WHO MADE U MAD,

CAN'T LIVE WITH THE RAIN ORIT MAY BE A FLOOD,

BUT U CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT IT BECAUSE THE RAIN CAME BEFORE THE DROUGHT ,THE SUN WARMED ME WHEN I WAS COLD AND THE WIND BLEW ME AWAY WITH LOVE,

Answer 1

You're poem is very unique like yourself, but try to work on your rhyming scheme, and use more words to express your feeling of a typical love, but other than that. Your poem is really cool!!=D

Just do a little more to it, but make it really your own poem to show your expression.