What do u think about this deck?

Question

I am trying to build an exodia deck and wondering if these cards will work for it

5 exodia pieces

gemini elf

2 labyrinth walls

2 red eyes b. dragons

giant soldier of stone

vorse raider

jinzo

jinzo - lord

jinzo - returner

guardian kay'est

emissary of the afterlife

mask of darkness

night assailant

sangan

dark mimic lvl3

needle worm

mst (mystical space typhoon)

upstart goblin

lightning vortex

ancient rules

monster reincarnation

scapegoat

monster reborn

chorus of sanctuary

dark factory of mass production

pot of avarice

amplifier

dust tornadoe

2 backup soldiers

mirror force

karma cut

no entry

common charity

transmigration prophecy

magic cylinder

jar of greed and

dark spirit art greed.

can u help me make this a good deck and also make it tournament legal.

Answer 1

no u will lose every time try this 5 pieces of exodia 1 sangan 3 cyber valley 3 mystic tomato 1 d hero disk commander 1 morphing jar 3 needle worm 1 fear monger 1 exodia necrose the gadget monsters spells 3 upstart goblen 2 allure of darkness 1 spell economics 3  pot of avarice 1 monster reborn 1 premature burial 1 foolish burial 1 card destruction traps 3 reckless greed 1 torrential tribute thats the deck list im playing darklord zerato and lightsworn but i did use this  during showen jump because i wanted to try it out i got 5 wins zero loses but then i had to give up because i had to go home [showen jump was last saturday] now u may lose sometimes but 7 out of 10 u will win p.s. use torrential tribute to destroy the field so u can play exodia and this deck ususly wins on its 2 turn hope this helped

Answer 2

Monsters:

3x Cyber Valley

1x Exodia the Forbidden One

1x Left Leg of the Forbidden One

1x Right Leg of the Forbidden One

1x Left Arm of the Forbidden One

1x Right Arm of the Forbidden One

3x Emissary of the Afterlife

1x Sangan

2x Mask of Darkness

2x Destiny Hero - Malicious

3x Destiny Hero - Dogma

3x Destiny Hero - Plasma

Spells:

2x Allure of Darkness

3x Trade In

3x Destiny Draw

3x Upstart Goblin

1x Monster Reincarnation

Traps:

1x Crush Card Virus

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Mirror Force

3x Reckless Greed

That's probably what you need now to make an Exodia deck. Good luck!