What do u think of my poem i wrote??

Question

running

running,

i am running through i grove

what i did was cunning

and now i can never go back

alls i have is my sack

atop of my back

and my hope

that is at the end of the rope

so here i am

with 20 paces tops

between me and the cops

wishing there was a lackie

for me and my sackie

so as i said

i am running

and i can never go back

running

Answer 1

its very good, The repition of the word running helped move it along and the rhyme scheme u used really put it into a steady rhythm almost as if ur running ur self. very good

Answer 2

If you are 10 it's pretty good, if not, it's pretty bad.

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Answer 3

OMG that is amaizing!!!!!!