What do u think of my poem?

Question

Soul

When our hands touch

on sunny afternoons

it crys

in silent croons

after we lay

in the crispy waters

it shivered

a chilverous cry

to him

the one I call love

then kissed the bitterness

and brought nector sweet inocence

into somber auburn

eyes that had forgotten happiness

that lyest with thou's

deepest desire

my soul sings

melodies unto the everlasting

correleation

between our souls

Love

Answer 1

Im not really a guy for poems but that was beautiful

Answer 2

Great poem...

Answer 3

I'm not really an expert at love poems, but it sounds pretty good.

Answer 4

its nice

Answer 5

nice

Answer 6

Nice.

Answer 7

i tihnk tahts a great poem and you put a lot of feeling into it

Answer 8

its really good

Answer 9

I feel like I can really relate to it,job well done.

Answer 10

Aw so pretty

I like how the feelings are put in here

one example

my soul sings

melodies unto the everlasting

The title is appropriate for the

poem also.

To him I call my love is

another line of person and emotion.

The first line talks about the weather.

Answer 11

i can feel the emotions embodied in your poem. bottomline, it's good.

Answer 12

needs work

1.whats a croon

2. you don't have to make the words on different lines all the time if you do that when you are reading it you'll have to pause every time you drop a space.

Answer 13

thats really good!!!! luv it