What do u think of my site?

Question

http://www.freewebs.com/rgerbils/

question - wt do u think of it and how can i improve send me pics and vids on home page so me can display them on site

Answer 1

Nice start, but you need to improve on your punctuation, capital letters etc. Make sure you try to grab the readers attention. But everything else is all right.

Answer 2

its good, you need punctuation tho.. capital letters

sorry I dont keep gerbil, I love rats

Answer 3

It's a good start.  You need to improve your grammar...you have some missing punctuation and a lot of run-on sentences which make reading confusing.  

I'll check more later when I can.