What do u think of this poem?

Question

CAN SHE

Can she make you feel the way I do?

Can she take away your pain?

Has she been with you through heartache?

Has she wiped your tears away?

Will she stand by your side forever?

Though the good times and the bad

Does she know just what to say to you?

When you're feeling low and sad?

Can she tell people she loves you?

And not care what they'll say?

When you are feeling lost or lonely

will she call out your name?

Answer 1

I really like it. A great last line that would become burned into your memory when you read it would make it even better. Does that make any sense?

Answer 2

i think it is good

you are VERY VERY talented!!!

Cool

Hope I helped!! :-)

- ♥ Taylor ♥

Answer 3

its good. are you getting into poetry?

Answer 4

WOW this is relly good!!  

Answer 5

This is a very good poem.  I can feel your pain.  Grammatically, you have a typo at the beginning of line 6.  Should be Through not Though.  Great job, keep writing and honing your skills!

Answer 6

I like it :)