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What do u think of this unedited piece I wrote?

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when can I get away from the thoughs everyday each book every poem only brings me heartache my mind just came seem to put you away in that distant cold place were Im not thinking of you each time I wake

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  1. Caitlin T, Good job!


  2. It needs edited.  Otherwise, it's ok.
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