What do u thinkk??

Question

Deep inside theres an unknown feeling

of love for the one i hate

is it too late

to take back the lies

of an unwanted lullaby

knowing that i'm afraid

afraid of love

afraid of trust

or maybe something more

but if this feeling is true

and i do come running back to you

how do i know you feel the same

how do i know if you love me too?

I make myself believe

the only way to know

is to take your hand

and let you show

theres more to us

theres love

now that i'm thinking it through

i know i have to choose

do i truly want you?

yes,i do, i love you

Answer 1

its pretty good

good job !

Answer 2

pretty d**n good. I like it, i see your love in the poem, but not just that i see you be optimistic about your decision and that is real feelings. I applaud you for writing this poem...

Answer 3

Not bad, love's angst.  To me, if you want to make it shine more, there are a lot of useless words such as "theres" in the first line, "the" in line 4, etc.  You could probably eliminate some lines or condense thoughts.  Overall, good effort.