What do you do when you see it happen right before your eyes?

Question

Flight 61 --Moscow

When I saw you smile

At the little child

In line...Somehow

You remind

Me...Of the magic

Albeit tragic

That you possess

Yes, I confess

It's best

I let go

But I thought you should know

I felt it

My heart melted

As the little child in you

Broke through and

Showed the beauty

Who you are

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Answer 1

The child in me

the child in you

is seen, each time

we take the time

to look and see.

Kudos! Hydro, this one is a heart melter, purity.

Answer 2

transformation, even transfiguration by a smile.

my heart melts as well.  Thank you so much!

Answer 3

Lovely sentimental recollection in poetic form.  Excellent work...great use of rhyme and descriptive language.  Well done.

Answer 4

This is simply marvellous. I was there looking over your shoulder.

Answer 5

You done well here.  You many now go to first class. Oh wait...where's the pilot?  My compliments.

Answer 6

It is difficult to make me feel amazement or wonder at a poem. You have done so this time.  

Answer 7

This poem brought back a memory from 9 years ago. I had this really tough friend; She was so tough she fought with boys, and she was a good fighter. (we were 18 at that time)

Alot of people feared her, and one day (when I use to smoke pot) I saw the kid in her. I saw that broken child, the soft feminine girl in her, and it broke my heart.

I always have this gift; the gift to find a way to see through a person. Anyway I never told her, but it was her inner broken spirit, that made her seem so tough on the out!

Anyway Hydro, I agree with the others, you have a way with all of us on here; with your words you pool things from within us.

And we relate.

Answer 8

Priviet...

This is greatness.

Answer 9

The ideas that you see and pen are truly a wonderful gift. You found a new way to echo and show the wonders of a mystery within a mystery. Wonderfully written.

Answer 10

Hydro, T'is you who have the magic,

Every word,so lovingly penned,

You truly know how to amend,

All thats Dark within our thoughts,

Words you write,

From the heart,

You will always be a part,

Of me.

In things you see,

That I see.

Answer 11

Excellent!  We've all had those magical moments.