What do you feel about this poem i just wrote a second ago (please answer now)?

Question

james is my name. i tell more games. then a puppet with a ring on his finger. go lame. because i'm not telling. this record isn't selling. and what to live for. no no no telling me please please i just sit i'm disease this isn't for artistic effect i'm ****** wrecked

Answer 1

both haunting and daunting

and if theres a point?

go roll another joint..

drink a little rum and the point will come.

keep on writing if only for the fun  of it!

Answer 2

make that a rap and its perfect.

Answer 3

sorry, didn't see the details. it's nice. i could picture it as a song

Answer 4

It is a pretty good effort especially if you were stoned . I know that the poet Coleridge was a cocaine freak and some of his poems are considered to be among the greats . I guess that just proves what people say , Poetry is the author's personal expression of  emotion writien in verse . It ,your poem , is really not

bad at all /One can follow it easily and it does not have to make any sense except to the poet .

All in all I liike it , I just what you could do if you were really trying . You certainly have a talent.

I hope this helps , good luck and God bless

Answer 5

Can I answer tomorrow? (Please)?