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What do you feel when you read this poem?

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It makes you want to :). the silence

that hurts. the words in your throat.the laughter of love

the feeling of being away,your mind wants to get away

there is no way, you want it to end. you just want to pretend

your hearts to race,

your heart can't take it,

you want to

escape it.

You know what coming,

The feeling of pain.

Of letting

it go.watch you go.

out the door.

Alone.

And knowing you, can't undo

what you just did....Distroying,

what we all knoe, scares the soul.

nothing can mend it

not even words of

forgiveness

By letting it

all go

you will soon know

what its really

feels like

to be in

love ♥

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  1. Sad.


  2. im not sure what i feel but i like the poem its good

  3. wow i felt saddness!!! i write alot of poems my self and this is a great poem...lluv it

  4. The song that fits this poem is by a group named Guy and is  called Goodbye Love.

  5. I felt my mouse under my hand.

  6. I makes me feel sad of course... Also kind of helpless and overwhelmed.

  7. Content:  Good - it made me sad at the beginning, and made me smile at the end

    Spelling and grammar:  There are a few mistakes.  "Distroying" should be "Destroying", and "knoe" should be "know".  "what its really feels like" should be "what it really feels like" and I'm not really sure what you mean by "your hearts to race" - "your heart starts to race" perhaps?

  8. Another affair gone down the tubes. One more relationship shot to h**l.

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