What do you find when you go looking?

Question

Reflections

by Jellz Fisher 080809

I saw her in the mirror one time

Glazed eyed, ragged from time’s passage.

Never said much to me, but the look….

Unmistakable.

I saw her in the window of a passing bus

Haggard, hassled and needing to be somewhere

Never heard her reasons, but the look….

Undeniable.

I saw her in the pools of the eyes of a child once

Hopeful, trusting, reflecting peace and love

Never saw her again, but the look….

Unrepeatable.

Answer 1

This is my favorite of yours, truly inspiring.

I saw her in my dream, the other day

Beautiful, radiant and warm

Never got to hold her, but the look

Unforgettable

Answer 2

Truly - to see oneself through our own eyes.  We spend - most of our time - living from the inside out.  Rarely - do we get a picture of ourselves - from the outside in. Often surprising ourselves - to really - see how tired, sick, old, happy, sad - we are. Well done on expressing - an often neglected viewpoint. ♥  

Answer 3

A grey sky,a rainy day,

droplets running down the window pane.

A dark,lonely and quiet night,

hoping tomorrows daybreak brings sunlight.

A forlorn and dirty city.

Answer 4

That is honestly beautiful. =]

Answer 5

J to the Z...You should step out more. Not oft I see you post as of late. Your reflective pen works quite well when you turn it toward your self ...Peace,R

Answer 6

wow *stunned*

beautiful mind i say.

Answer 7

This is one of the best of yours that I have read.  My compliments.

Answer 8

"Hi!",

Good evening too you! : )

wow, great poem off the bat today.

Written well, described well, great imagery.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )