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What do you gather from this poem? Critique welcome.?

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What kind of thoughts does this poem elicit from you? Sexual? Romantic? etc. Any critique welcome as well. Thank you in advance.

"Thomas"

Rich cocoa embedded in your skin

Has astonished me that in hindsight,

The Sweetness had seeped out from Within

And Comforted my Cries throughout the Night

It passed through my body and its Entirety

Making my Silent Screams urge no more

Although the Sweet Essence I could not see

It eased the Pain of my internal War

And when I see the Pearls of white shine,

Life seems so very worthwhile

I desire to stop the concept of Time

So that I could forever see your Smile

And so that I could taste that Abstract Rose

My lips yearning! At that sensual Thought

Of touching that soft mound beneath your nose

For no one can bring me what You have brought.

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  1. I sorta got dizzy halfway through it, sorry


  2. It rhymes?

    I just couldnt read it. I am sorry. It is dreadfully confusing

    answer mine please

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

  3. WOW U $UCK BiiG AT WRiiTiiNG $O U $HOULD JU$T QUiiT FOR UR OWN GOOD NiiG

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