What do you guys think about my poem "Why not believe?"?

Question

please no harsh feelings:)

Why not Believe?

I know I believe

You say you don’t but you do

why would you say you didn’t believe in

Something you didn’t believe existed

It only shows you believe in it enough not to believe in it

Otherwise you would keep silent

But you cant because you believe

Answer 1

it's ok. philosophical, short, clear, but you should know that it is a question well known, and a strong argument in convincing people that the should believe in anything, i mean, things that are not necessarily true.

and as always people who are near you would star believing in the things you believe, or will eventually be gone.:)

Answer 2

Pretty confusing but kool

Answer 3

Terrythesca,

I won't be harsh, but I know you can do a ton better! This style is what I call the riddle wrapped inside of a puzzle trapped within an enigma. It works if you stick to the premise of the idea (you know, the Abbott & Costello's "Who's On First?" comedy sketch theory...) and sell it  against the misdirection of humor and wit! May I? Thanks...

CAN YOU BELIEVE?

Can you believe that I believe you don't believe you won't believe I didn't believe you would believe that what I believed existed? I never believed you'd say you'd believed that we could believe in the same belief it takes to believe in belief? Believe in me to believe in your belief in me and I'll believe in your beliefs if your beliefs are believeable because I belie in even unbelieveable belief and you best believe it because I believe in you, do you believe in me?

If you can say this faster than I, I might believe you. Grade  D