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What do you guys think of my newest poem?

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Let me know what you guys think and be honest and defiantly DON'T BE RUDE...also to be honest I wasn't trying to rhyme I was actually writing what I felt within myself

Silent

By: Adam Snow

This silence is killing me each day

I hold this in. All the pain, sorrow, and

agony no long has it's narrowing grip on

me. I'm breaking free can't you see. I'm

no longer blind from you offensive mind.

All that I have held within for so long has

finally broke through my bind. It's out now

for all the world to see, the darkened side of

me. My pain scorched eyes stuck fear into

their eyes. They ran, they hide, but the

day has come for them to hold this pain

inside so that they know now the pain

they have caused me. So now their eyes

are scorched by the same pain, the same,

sorrow, and the same agony as mine.

The day that I awaited for so long has

finally come, for I am silent no more.

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  1. Touching, brilliant, a true masterpiece!!! I can not say bravo enough!


  2. well written. i get it. i like it. sounds like revenge.

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