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What do you guys think of my poem???

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Not very good at them and no i don't want the correction of stanza's and my use of literacy devices LOl

Its a poem to a friend/sister and i sure hope she would like it...wat do u guys think???

The day we met,

Strangers to be the best of friends,

Is still as rich in my heart,

As the day we met,

And our hearts silently exchanged sincere vows to be friends forever,

Alhamdullilah we still are,

And Inshallah we will still be,

The times we had together,

Is still cherished in my memories,

As life goes on by,

As more people enter your life,

And make an oath of love,

Just remember that you had a friend,

Who loved you most dearly,

Prayed for you in her salah,

That you will maintain your purity,

Your innocence,

Your piety,

And your decency,

And be very virtuous,

You are the eldest and we look up to you,

For support,

For guidance,

And knowledge,

Inshallah you will exceed in your duty,

And we can still look up to,

Our older sister.

Till our last breath is taken by God almighty,

And dust is our bed,

I will be more than happy,

To say that you were my friend,

On the face of the Earth,

On the day of Judgement,

Though we could have sought many deceiving pleasures,

We denied them,

You never urged me to do wrong,

Instead supported me following the right path,

Thank you for being my older sister,

Supporting me through all these long years,

You were always there for me,

You always encouraged me to do good,

Never failed to understand me,

Endowed me with blissful advice,

Which will remain with me forever,

Along with your words of love and caress,

Blessed with beauty,

Values and morals,

A soft caressing heart,

A heart of Gold

Exceeding knowledge,

Please bestow upon us some of your knowledge,

Guide us open the rightful path,

Enlighten us,

Our older sister,

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  1. i really like it. i think that ur older sister will be touched that u would right something like that about her.

    i'd give it an 8.   =)

    ps do u write more poems cause id love to hear them


  2. subhanallah its beautifully written 10/10

  3. that is a very long and very well written, it describes your feelings extremely well and im sure anybody would be happy to recieve a poem of this standard, some use of language i would change but 8/10

  4. I love it

  5. mashallah its nice ,and well written

  6. It's nice.  Please answer this:

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

    It's in R&S against Islam.  Thank you.

  7. i think it's very sweet and honest and it means a lot to have made this yourself and expressed your own words.

    it's a beautiful poem and i'm sure she will like it.

  8. REALLY GOOOD!!!

    keep up gd work

    x

  9. Nice. I give it a 7/10 cuz I like poems that rhyme.

  10. I'm sure she'll love it.

    Its nice.

  11. as i told you before, Mashallah. its wonderful i would give it 10/10.

  12. wow...Mashallah !! im not a fan of poetry but urz is really good!!

    and ur blessed to have a sister like that !

  13. your wonderful person i can tell

  14. sooo sweet.im sure shell like it ill give it 9/10

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