Not very good at them and no i don't want the correction of stanza's and my use of literacy devices LOl
Its a poem to a friend/sister and i sure hope she would like it...wat do u guys think???
The day we met,
Strangers to be the best of friends,
Is still as rich in my heart,
As the day we met,
And our hearts silently exchanged sincere vows to be friends forever,
Alhamdullilah we still are,
And Inshallah we will still be,
The times we had together,
Is still cherished in my memories,
As life goes on by,
As more people enter your life,
And make an oath of love,
Just remember that you had a friend,
Who loved you most dearly,
Prayed for you in her salah,
That you will maintain your purity,
Your innocence,
Your piety,
And your decency,
And be very virtuous,
You are the eldest and we look up to you,
For support,
For guidance,
And knowledge,
Inshallah you will exceed in your duty,
And we can still look up to,
Our older sister.
Till our last breath is taken by God almighty,
And dust is our bed,
I will be more than happy,
To say that you were my friend,
On the face of the Earth,
On the day of Judgement,
Though we could have sought many deceiving pleasures,
We denied them,
You never urged me to do wrong,
Instead supported me following the right path,
Thank you for being my older sister,
Supporting me through all these long years,
You were always there for me,
You always encouraged me to do good,
Never failed to understand me,
Endowed me with blissful advice,
Which will remain with me forever,
Along with your words of love and caress,
Blessed with beauty,
Values and morals,
A soft caressing heart,
A heart of Gold
Exceeding knowledge,
Please bestow upon us some of your knowledge,
Guide us open the rightful path,
Enlighten us,
Our older sister,
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