What do you guys think of this poem I wrote to/about my cousin? It's called End The Quarrel?

Question

End The Quarrel

We’ve spent fourteen years hating each other

And we argued quite a bit

I feel like I’ve missed out on knowing a great and truly beautiful person

By avoiding conversation and saying cruel words to you

I have an everlasting debt owed to you

And am willing to do anything to repay you

I say we end this little spat that we have

And forget it ever happened

There wasn’t really ever a reason

For our fourteen year long bicker-fest

I propose we start over

And give this thing another shot

Hello, my name is Jake

And you are?

Answer 1

i like it!!

haven't really seen alot of work like this!!

it's different and good. write more.

how about mine?

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Answer 2

fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!! well done.