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What do you guys think of this poem???

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I wrote this poem called Broken Heart

I handed you my heart,

wrapped safely in a crate.

Told you it was fragile,

Asked you to keep it safe.

You told me you would.

Promised it too!

I thought you were different,

so I believed you.

But when returned,

I could clearly see

That you didn't

Truly love me.

Damaged and Broken,

In pieces it was.

And so now,

I can no longer love.

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  1. The theme is very cliche, and your expressions not very intense.  


  2. Very good. I love poems about all things related to love. Pretty dang good.

  3. I like it .. its awesome  

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