What do you guys think of this short poem I wrote?

Question

This is called "A Story Of Love"

I've discovered your wings,

fly away with me.

Let's travel over the sea,

and discover things.

We can be anything we want to be.

Let's create a world,

where we can live, breathe… exist.

In our ecstasy, we'll remember our first kiss.

We'll sleep all day, laying curled,

and listen to love songs.

You are

my angel;

I am your dove.

And we…

we are in love.

Answer 1

This poem is thoughtful. As it is everytime you write it. I am touched

Answer 2

i like the second stanza, i'm not too sweet on the other two.

Answer 3

it's so beautiful. even the second paragraph. that was my favorite!

Answer 4

the first stanza is too generic

the second is alright

and the 3rd is just not very well structured or thought out. it doesn't really look like it belongs.

overall it looks like you kinda just rushed when writing this