What do you guys think of this story i'm writing?

Question

Its called Predator Apocalpse and stars Dwight the Rock Johnson, Mark Wahlberg, Kate Beckinsale, and Milla Jovoiach

in this hit film/story predators who are good join sides with a four team crew to battle aliens who have their own team.

the story/film is rated R, and has a great rock/metal soundtrack, and also stars Vin Diesil, Parker Posey, Ving Rhames, Melina Perez, and Michael Clarke Duncan. Tell me honestly What you guys think of this?

Answer 1

It sounds like a beast movie. i would go see it.

Answer 2

i am afraid i would have to actuially read it or watch the film to give a reasonabley  fair opinion on the story.however the plot realy is not a new concept it has been done before.severial times but i am shure it will do for the sci fi channel....    enjoy youre dream and never give up on it.hope you suceed.

Answer 3

Is it predator from the movie predator or are you making a new character design just with a repeated name. I believe it would be most beneficial to not base it on a creature already associated with such a popular film. This creates a comparison to the older predator films that you might not be able to make.

It would be interesting if it were a straight team on team battle, the two teams fighting for the fate of the galaxy in a set game established by an overseer whom dictates not only the rules of the game but the fate of both worlds.

Answer 4

Honestly. It sounds bad by what you have put there. You should think of a Begining, A middle and an End, befor you decide who is going to be in it.

This is what it sounds like.

Film with people who hunt alians... Pritty action packed with many fight scenes (Heavy/rock Music)

That's all i got... A film where people who hunt alians.

+ Imagin how much it would cost to get ALL those people to star in 1 film.

Try thinking about these.

The Plot. Or.. The story line..

The begining. It should contain essential information needed to understand the story, including the setting, introducing the main character (If you have 1 main one), and a situation the story focuses on.

Then a complication around the middle. It is this complication that creates the overall situation and raises the stakes because the main character needs to resolve the dilemma.

The "Climax" Where everything is EXITING AND RUSHED! (Want people on the edge of there seat)  It is often the turning point in the story where some twist occurs. This is where the character or characters try to resolve the complication.

Then the ending. good? Bad? Up to you. But remeber. The ending is what makes a different between reviews. A bad ending makes a bad film... This is where the complication is solved and the hidden clues and twists are clarified.

Then think about your characters (Not who will play them)

The background to them. How they grew up. How did they end up where they are. The aliens are just Aliens.. So... They don't need to be any certain character because they will die anyways :) But you can always have a  "big bad guy." And then a "Big good guy who will kill the big bad guy"

Once you have that. Think about whre to set it.

In a jungle? In New york? In a small village in the middle of nowhere? It's up to you.

then the important part. The theme. Soemthing behind the story. E.G "Fight together to survive" or "Working together gets the job done." you can do this indirectly or directly. SO.. Tell them somepoint in the film/story... Or don't tell them :)

That's your basics to writing/thinking about a fuim/story.

(I am currectly writing a book.)

I hope i helped.

Answer 5

Can you describe the actual story rather than the elements that make it up?

It sounds like more of a movie than a story. Not my thing but I know of people who like alien-battle-human movies

Answer 6

great and touching. sound like a movie i already want to watch. your great. and the title are much fantastic. interesting.